Fuente:

raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/9e87b06971/2239512-97
ENG: https://e-hentai.org/g/2414167/9310d35dfc/

Check, just testing my account

Base +6

A few things:
- Dunno what it your translation process but you should always use the source language as a baseand treat the existing translations as inspiration only. Because if the translation has some errors or loses some nuance you end up reproducing them in your own translation, which is exactly what happened with Nibai! 3 Chuuhen.
- That said, don't mind you reusing my translation, but you may as well go with the final version instead: https://e-hentai.org/g/2948865/e2895e77e0/
- And for the japanese title, don't forget to replace [英訳] with [スペイン翻訳]

Base +31, Muaki Pero +5