Hello everyone! This is my first time uploading to e-hentai.
I've been posting captions for a while but now I want to create comics, any feedback would be appreciated. Trying to find my footing here :)
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Heyyy so I guess I’m your first feedback then !

Overall I think the aesthetic is interesting, it doesn’t look sloppy like most cartoonish AI art.
The text at the bottom of each pics instead of dialogues is interesting as well but i feel like a mix of both could be of use in some of the pictures.

Last but not least, the story kinda feels unfinished (maybe it is ?) we’d expect a sex scene in a hentai website ? Maybe embracing her new life and going out ? Idk…

Sorry if my English is bad btw

Looking forward to seeing more of your work

Base +4, 3dkxfan +6, raperv26 +9, margin6483 +3, Shepg +6, maleh +13

we need part 2, but do next time more smooth transition

Base +6

Interesting stuff. There's not a lot of (semi )consentual tsf
But, agreed with the above, a smoother transition would've been better; and maybe not sex, but rather like some exploration of the body - main character commenting on changes, thing like massaging breasts or masturbatory type things.

Also, not sure if you're the one that added all of the tags initially, but a lot of the ones I see there right now don't fit - f:lingerie (there's no female wearing that), f:gender change (there's no f->m transition), m:anal (what?), m:mind break (again, what?), m:chastity belt (lol what), m:mind control (None of that is happening), m:corruption (???)
I guess, try to be a bit more accurate with the tags, don't spam them

But yeah, overall, not bad, would read more, keep it up

Base +29