Hello everyone! This is my first time uploading to e-hentai.
I've been posting captions for a while but now I want to create comics, any feedback would be appreciated. Trying to find my footing here :)
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Heyyy so I guess I’m your first feedback then !

Overall I think the aesthetic is interesting, it doesn’t look sloppy like most cartoonish AI art.
The text at the bottom of each pics instead of dialogues is interesting as well but i feel like a mix of both could be of use in some of the pictures.

Last but not least, the story kinda feels unfinished (maybe it is ?) we’d expect a sex scene in a hentai website ? Maybe embracing her new life and going out ? Idk…

Sorry if my English is bad btw

Looking forward to seeing more of your work

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