Bro wants to make a comic book so bad but just wrote a bunch of text walls next to pictures. If you're gonna make trash AT LEAST make it resemble the trash you're stealing from
Base +6, Exule -6, Sydorovich +6, Calistra +7, Fabulous0521 -5
Don't understand the negativity. If you don't like it, don't look. There are what, a million pages here? Some is so repetitive that is hard to see changes. This is actually decent. Yeah, a few typos and syntax errors. There is a story here.