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@Zelinko We went with hitouban (飛頭蛮) because that's the term the artist uses throughout the doujinshi, not rokurokubi (ろくろ首). While her theme song is indeed 柳の下のデュラハン (Dullahan Under the Willows), the doujinshi itself uses 柳の下の飛頭蛮 instead. Rokurokubi are known for stretching their necks, while hitouban detach their heads and let them fly around. Since this doujinshi has Sekibanki using her Flying Heads spellcard throughout rather than her stretching neck, it makes sense that the artist chose hitouban here. As for page 6, the text being under the SFX is intentional. That's how it's layered in the raw as well.
Why are you using "Hitouban" to describe her species? She's Japanese NOT Chinese. Use "Rokurokubi" or "Dullahan" instead. The later makes Page 5 a reference to her theme song "Dullahan Under the Willows"
Page 6: Text layering error. The Translated Text is UNDER the sound effect.
I was hoping either biting or having sex with the other girl was going to pass the curse on to her as well. Kind of disappointing that it didn’t. I wanted to see her grow a cock at the end.