The context seems like this would be a sexy read, but the translations are so offputting. This has to be machine translated, with no proof reading whatsoever. Cause it's simple stuff like "You" vs "I".
Like, page 7, why is the girl with the dick, the one saying "Or if I'm going to get creampied in one shot"
It's just tough to read, especially when some of the words overlap or doesn't make sense.