Right out of the gate you fucked up. In page 1, there's an extra speech bubble after Starfire's first line that's completely empty as if she had more to say. Don't tell me you missed that on accident. You spent who long outlining, drawing, and composting on this and you somehow missed that? Fuck off. And that's just the tip of the iceberg in this garbage comic. Starfire looks like she's made of plastic, her room looks flat and doesn't resemble her room from the show, the dialogue sucks ass (Why he's in my TV?, Catch you was easier than I thought, Don't think you win just yet are some of the worst line's in this shit), the page numbers aren't placed properly, and the whole set up is forced because Starfire could easily mop the floors with Control Freak. If this didn't come out in 2019, I'd swear you used ChatGPT to make this. This is such a lazy, stupidly thought out, and pathetic piece of trash that's just another example of someone not knowing what they're doing making a porn comic with no talent or respect for the source material. Unironically, I could make a better comic than this in my fucking sleep -.-

Base +10, Mordai -7, Ryan24 -6, ChastePumpkin -13, Exgapa -6

@BJay653 Why do you think I'm the artist? I made very clear I'm not.

Base +16, Mordai +7

@EDP I wasn't talking to you -.-

Base +10, Mordai -7, Ryan24 -6, ChastePumpkin -13

@BJay653 Then go to the original artist for your comment, rather than maker it where the only logical recipient is myself.

Base +16, Mordai +7

@EDP Oh get over yourself. Someone else was gonna come in and comment how this was a shit comic regardless if you're the original artist or not. Look at the score. People are clearly not impressed with this lazy as shit quality. And there's a good chance the original artist is gonna see this gallery to see what people think of this shit and if they're smart they'll listen to the feedback and get better at drawing before attempting something like this again. But let's not kid ourselves, they're probably dumb as rocks and will call any legitimate complaint trolling and double down on their shitty art skills -.-

Base +10, Mordai -7, Ryan24 -6, ChastePumpkin -13

@BJay653 If that's your opinion, go to the original artist and tell him, it's more likely they'll see your criticism. Not that I think they'll care for a rude child.

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@EDP you're over here unironically defending this garbage and telling me to take my criticisms to the artist who's only outlet is Patreon where you need to pay him in order to leave comments on his works, nevermind message him about this shit. If anyone's being a child, it's you for not being able to handle other people rightfully calling this comic dogshit -.-

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