Even for MTL, this is just terrible. Stop uploading. Look at the ratings you get on your galleries. No one wants these.

Base +14, Ayanix -15, dogra +7

The illustration is good, but the story is lame. The hero's a moron, literally saw a soldier who is right next to the demon king I guess king, but really a queen. Decides this guy cant be a lier too also while betraying her with him claiming to be sent by the nation was the truth. While literally the demon king is sitting right next to the guy. Im sure the plot will make this out as the truth later because then you have realize how stupid this hero is. But how with so little information do you think to believe a guy who just betrayed you and is literally her with the demon king who immediately afterwards goes see i would never betray you like that human who just was here with me a second ago. Turns her then literally says be the way I want you or ill destroy your soul. The Hero is a moron.

Base +3

Good story, bad dialog.

Base +8