This one tried to make sense of the multiple of her thing, but it still honestly was stupid still and just a plot point to have more versions of the same character. While both being evil but trying the overused excuse of betrayal for being evil. I'm actually struggling to read at this point the Drawings are not that good anymore and there's still drawing lines on half the characters. All men in this story are portrayed as morons or evil. This is a jaded artist about life.

Base +3, ForteMaster -7

The dialog is improved, but still needs a lot of work.

Base +8