Uhh sorry I’m not a pro doujin translator(?) 💀 had a friend put my translations in the bubbles tho so yeah. Maybe you should translate the works then terry :)!
It's okay for a first translation, don't let that discourage you, although let me tell you that if you translated this from Spanish to English, I don't know if those translations are very good because the Spanish one was done by a terrible person.
Thank u for the criticism I’ll try and improve tho im only in charge of text transitions my friend handles the rest! But I actually translated Japanese text(thought abt doing the Chinese but I have an easier time with jp honestly since im part)
Yes, it makes sense that there are two, because some parts are translated from Japanese and others from Spanish, although I suspect your friend did most of it. I recommend removing the text manually because your friend's translations were done with automatic typesetting/TL, which is what the previous comment mentioned, But since only 1 credit appears in the end, I thought maybe you used 2 sources for some reason.
Yeah, the typesetting looks really bad. It looks like the typesetter used an AI tool to automatically clean and do their job. Font size is vastly inconsistent and shit is going over speech bubbles.