Hey everyone!
I'm trying out a new story and world building that I'm really excited for. It's a little slow but I think you'll like it :)

Yes the text is a little small, I'm gonna work on fixing it for the next ones.

Check out my Patreon as well!
https://www.patreon.com/collection/2310207

Saw this, went and looked at your other upload, left a comment there too -

My only major piece of feedback is to increase the text size but decrease the contrast, don't put 255,255,255 text on 0,0,0. Make it off-white text and an off-black background.

Interesting story so far, pacing is better than in the first one, would definitely read more, keep it up!

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