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ayase mio:all according to plan（Original Japanese text： 計画通り）?

Base +8

Damn. The girl is cute, but this is my least favorite kind of mind control plot. Her personality is entirely suppressed, and there's nothing in its place. Everything past page four is just watching a dude masturbating.

The way she's drawn on the first couple pages is so fun. Really expressive, great bratty/smug presentation. But by the time the sex kicks in she's totally lifeless. Disappointing.

Base +6, Wenser +7, PipedPiper +7, Jay Low +26, dakal34 +6, Raidatheblade +6, LRaglan +7, IMNC +7, spamsucker321 +6, darienkd +9, Olivki +6, henrik +6, qweaewq +6, and 5 more...

Lifeless mind control can be fun, but this is just... boring. Little build-up, no struggling of her as she's being slowly controlled, no personality erasure, no flash-forward to her being his for weeks. Just seems to lack a hook.

Base +6, LRaglan +7, spamsucker321 +6, Thegrayspy +6, as102 +15, Nicosai +22, YuriYeti1 +5, James2841 +6

obvious automatic typeset / mtl artifacts and precedent, tagging rtl

Base +55