Any critiques? Any advice? I’m happy to hear! :D

The cover really caught my attention, and the rest of your oneshot looks good, I say you must continue, I see you have good potential and with a little practice you might create better works, that's my opinion
P.D. I suggest you to add your contacts in the comments to be more easy for the people to find, seems the browser like to shadow bann cause I struggled to find you

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I'm still trying to understand how this site works! I'm not even sure how to reply to you sorry :((
But thank you very much! My socials are @TatsumimZz on insta and yt! I will absolutely be continuing haha I am very happy to deliver good smut :D

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Love the volume and details of those tentacles, and the expressions are great too! One suggestion though, if you're gonna be working in black and white, it'll be helpful to work with more contrast to keep things readable.

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