I bring you all a new version, where I changed the font and corrected some parts of the translation

Hey man, I know this is your first round, but the processing on the blue text renders it really hard to read against the black background. Perhaps a white highlight around it will prevent text from blending with the black?

Base +10, BluesisRed +9, MortiferDec +6, Tails32 +11, Frankon +7

I have increased the text size, changed its color to white, and improved the image quality.

I had been told that onomatopoeia was difficult to read, so I changed it and also changed the color of the text.

Last edited on 15 October 2025, 12:16.

Base +6, ohjadatzieterlekruit +6, thatguylol +7, noname31 +6, nero994 +6, HurricaneBeater +5, gioppo89 +17, robert971 +6, ‗‗_ +6, HeavierAnchor +5, BluesisRed +9, gigan +12, DragonSH666 +5, and 4 more...

It's just so sad how much Takeda degenerated their art.

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