I mean if this is your own translation and not mtl I can see why you would be upset, but you also have to understand people. You translation might be direct but "piston pace"? for instance who says something like that, it makes no sense in english? if you take the time to actually translate yourself please also take the few minutes it would take to not only translate the direct meaning but also contruct it into a logical sentence. So many of the sentences feel and read bad, if this is your genuine own work, I respect that and thank you for taking the time, please next time put in the time to construct meaning full sentences.
If you use mtl go fuck yourself you deserve the rating and worse
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