I am still learning Japanese so I used MTL and then corrected any errors or poor grammar to the best of my ability. Take it with a grain of salt. If you think you can do better, go for it. There's no better way to learn. That said, this is complete.
"corrected any errors or poor grammar" Either this is a complete lie, or I'm afraid of seeing the original mtl. The translation is so bad, it's hard to even understand what is happening.