Great to see this being translated again. Where's 13 though?

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Posting it in some time

Chapter 13 may turn out to be the best translated lol
This is due to the improvements I made to my program
Ill have to redo all of them ffs

Last edited on 31 August 2026, 19:34.

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I'm the last person to criticise AI translated work, but seeing as I'm the one that probably inspired you to start translating, and I'm currently working on both "The cold and beautiful CEO mother..." and "Aurora", I felt I needed to say something.
Which is that while these translations are better than nothing, these are genuinely awful. It's very clear that you've done no editing or quality control at all before uploading, just taking the results of the automatically processed images directly. Text outside of speech bubbles, formatting issues, translation issues. For god sake, on this page: "https://e-hentai.org/s/f4dcb0f754/4160387-278";, the thinking trace by the AI/LLM is directly put into the speech bubble! And even a cursory proof-read could tell that this image is not okay: "https://e-hentai.org/s/842b759db6/4160561-30";.
The technology and tools are just not good enough currently to deliver good enough images without at least some manual work. If it were, I could've uploaded both works long ago. Just to give you an example, I'm processing my work with multiple scripts, the main one being a ~12000 line custom python script in order to refine the processing, and this is before I do anything manually.
I genuinely welcome other people working on un-translated work, because this means I could be reading work I'm interested in instead of working on them. But this ain't it. Translation and editing like this actually harm the reputation of AI processed work, something I obviously have an interest in. You have to at the very least scrutinize every page you've processed before publicly publishing them, otherwise it's just AI slop.
Please take this as the constructive criticism it is.

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пракляты нетарарэ

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Understood
Even I understand how awful this translation is
but its better than nothing
This is my first ever attempt and well I just hope to do better next time

When you do post your translation I'll take these down

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So, as the person who originally started translating this work, I actually feel compelled to comment on this. I know I have no right to complain, since I practically abandoned the project halfway through. This happened for numerous reasons, namely a lack of time and energy, because real life demanded my full attention.

I'm not sure about automating the process or using scripts, since I did everything the old-fashioned way—the way I learned to do it with Escalation.

I can say that the translation and editing were relatively simple once I streamlined the process and the tools I used. The cleaning and redrawing, however, were by far the most excruciating and time-consuming tasks. I could have simply decided to lower the standards of what I considered acceptable when it came to cleaning and, consequently, dedicated that time to releasing the rest of the chapters. But between my unwillingness to compromise on quality and my lack of energy to focus on the project, it became impossible for me to continue.

And let me be clear: that was 100% a me problem. I'm not going to make any more excuses, and I feel like I owe you guys an apology. Sorry for leaving without an update.

After all that being said, I actually commend your efforts to bring closure to the story by translating the rest of the chapters. My advice to you would be to focus on strengthening your core skills, as that will go a really long way toward improving the end result on your future projects.

For editing, you can look for better font choices and check out editing/cleaning tutorials for whatever program you choose (usually Photoshop or GIMP).

For translating and proofreading, you can now leverage all these AI tools—ChatGPT, Grok, DeepSeek, God knows they helped me a lot. And above all, exercise a little common sense. AI can be incredibly useful, but don't blindly copy and paste what it gives you. Make sure the translation actually makes sense in context. Just my two cents of advice.

I don't have as much time as I did when I started, but life is relatively stable now. So, I've been considering picking up where I left off, and maybe this is the motivation I needed. Especially since I fully intend to release a Spanish version of the comic, which is my native language, and that means I'll have to translate and clean the rest of the chapters anyway. I might as well complete my English version while I'm at it.

Let me know if you guys would be interested in that!

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