Had to Restart the Project with a new artist! Though this one is in full color!

Went back and touched up the dialog in the earlier pages.

Artist: Ferulaboy

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Oh, this is a step up in quality from the first attempt. I like this one.

Just 1 gripe. In the future issues, can you make the text bubbles a bit more clear with the reading order

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I'll tell the artist going forward! Thanks for the heads up!

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The grammar could use an slight improvement, but I'm not complaining as long we're getting thicc milfs out of it

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Are there no raws available then? I ask because the art is nice, however the english being used is very rough. Sentence structure wise and grammar.

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The grammar is odd. Since while I do give the artist a direct script, he tends to add and change things quite a bit. And he isn't a native English speaker sadly.

Most of the dialog is actually all from him. And I try to clean it up here and there for edits while keeping things in the word bubbles.

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