Posted on 09 September 2026, 03:26 by: Climatic0230
Score +31
The creator needs to learn proper grammar and story flow. The positioning of the text on some of the pages (17 is a perfect example of what I mean.) Truly makes the hate against AI generated content valid. Wee come here in SPITE of the AI tag, and expect at least proper grammar! And stop switching from he to she and back again in the same damn panel!
Further more, it just doesn't flow visually. Eye and ear color changes constantly between frames. I can only assume this was laziness on the part of the creator, because the dick size manages to remain fairly consistent. Maybe the thought was "No one is going to look at the face." but people DO.
Ehhhhh. This only marginally passes the presence rule for gender change, because their tits keep vanishing and reappearing from page to page. If you're gonna make the protag go girl, actually go girl with it instead of waffling back and forth inconsistently like this. A strictly femboy gallery would also have worked better, tbh.
This is a consistent problem with GenAI slop, and why I tend to skip them.