Wink got an upgrade just because lmao

Base +6

Not going to bother with the whole thing, but these errors really stand out immediately.

p3
頑張って背伸びまでしてくれて愛を感じるよ
おじさんの愛もお返ししてあげるからいっぱい飲んでね
You're trying so hard, even standing on tiptoe, I can really feel your love. (yes 背伸び can be used purely as an idiom but it's fairly literal here)
Oji-san will return your love, so drink up. (still the old man talking)

p6
…褒め言葉じゃないわよそれ
...That's not a compliment. (She is saying that the old man's text in the bottom right, talking about wanting to fuck her, isn't a compliment)

Base +11, unvermeidlich +7, igurust +6, happyjeans +6