Écrire par darati
https://www.patreon.com/darati

More trash tbh. It doesn't flow well, the grammar is still bad. At least the visuals are SLIGHTLY better with MOSTLY consistent chest sizes. On other improvement over the last one is the consistent switch from male to female pronouns. But why bring the hypnosis in at the very end? At the hair length is wild, switching from shoulder length to ass length and back within a two panels!

OP, this is BETTER than the last one, I'll give you that. But think about how you want your stories to flow. Not just generate porn then think of some story to fit it afterwards.

Base +6, darati -3, babykataboy +6, sotelox +6, ast4 +6, usversionofme +7, JustNoscope +5, Jermatoo +6

"Boy, I sure love Serena, but you know what'd be better? If she were actually a boy but got feminized back INTO a girl"

Of all the plot ideas, this sure is one of them. lol

Base +20