My first manga attempt. I did use AI but took forever to prompt this correctly. I did not just spend 5 minutes making this, more like three full days or so, but hopefully you like my first little attempt at a horror erotica story.

piece of shit

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@FoTon thanks for your comment even if you didn’t like it. If I were to rate my own first work attempt here I would agree with a 2/5 stars, but curious why? If it’s just because you don’t like the fetish that is fine, I am targeting a very niche audience.

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It obviously looks like sloppiest shit. If you spent 3 days for THIS, then it feels bad man. If you don't have a taste - no AI will help you create anything.
I don't mind generated stuff WHEN IT LOOKS GOOD.
The 0/5 rating is for this annoying overcooked greasy images with most annoyingly generic facial expressions.

More detailed review:
Character design: 0/5 (boring and generic)
Writing: 1/5 (just bland)
Style: -9/5 (fucking disgusting)
Ego 5/5 ("targeting audience" and "my first try" goes great together)

Also, there is ai-generated tag that applied automatically when you add [AI Generated] in title, be a good boy and use it properly.
And there is no vore, at least in my book it's not.

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If you don't mind a feedback, I think it's not the AI usage being the top issue here. Well, based on personal take as an amateur artist myself:
- The panel layout is repetitive, it feels like a slide show framed in a manga layout. When designing a comic page, many artist uses varying frame size to "guides" the viewer attention and control the storytelling. Big frame for important shot, small frame for exposition, transition, etc.
- The camera angle is too repetitive, it's all eye level camera. You could play around with the camera angle a bit. Like use high angle shot, low angle, etc.
- The character pose looks stiff and the expression is very repetitive, like it got reused a lot. Again, this can be remedied by using different camera or character head angle.
- I think the exposition is too much, every pages seems like you're trying to overtell the story. You don't need to show EVERYTHING step by step of what's happening. Let the viewer fill the gap a bit with their own imagination.
- Lastly, the art style, it looks very AI generated. I know I said AI generated is not the issue, but these art style in particular has been overdone so much with anime AI comic. It has that generic grainy/noisy feels to it. And page 9 for example, the seasoning on her skin looks too "patterny" and rigid, it looks like decorative texture. It's like the AI trying to just do whatever to fill the the skin with cilantro and it prints everything on top of it.

Well like the previous commenter said (rather agressively), AI enables more people to create, but the real difference lies in how effectively they use it.

If I offend you in any way, I apologize. But good luck though ;)

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Put this in MISC where it belongs.

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@MoresFinem and @Leanovers

Thanks for your comments, and don’t worry it
Was not harsh, I kind of expected this after posting especially for this fetish category.

That said it sounds like the main issue is the art quality and facial expressions which while I did work on that, clearly I did not work enough. I may have to use multiple different AIs to
Improve the quality and ensure the layout changes more.

I had a really hard time on some of the pages because the AI I was using was fighting me on censorship, so if you have any recommendations on a good one let me know.

Also I didn’t know that adding [ai generated] in the title would add that automatically, this is good to know, when uploading it never gave mention to that just so you know why that happened.

Story wise I didn’t think what I had was that bad considering the fetish but I can try to add even more backstory and detail in the future. Was meant to be simple on purpose this time around.

In anycase seems I have a lot of work to do to improve, so this feedback has been helpful. I will try again with some different techniques to see what I come up with.

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I don’t like it, and I don’t understand why the vore tag is there when there’s no vore.
Absorption, perhaps, but not vore.

But I think it’s good for a first manga attempt.
Although I understand that people can be critical of the use of AI, it’s better to leave constructive criticism.

I’d advise you to take a look at the work of other people who use AI, such as ChurnVeil or VoreQueen.
Or perhaps you could even look into tools other than AI, such as creating your own 3D models, as HenBor does, for example.
It might take some time, but ultimately it will give you more options than using AI.

I don’t speak English, so I’m sorry if this isn’t clear.
I’m not an artist, nor do I use AI image generation, so this isn’t constructive criticism, just my opinion.

As far as censorship is concerned, it seems to me that it’s only certain keywords that are censored, not the image itself.
It seems to me that even a censored AI can create something NSFW if it fails to detect that it should be censored.
This may have changed, but you need to use words that only the AI can understand and that the censorship system doesn’t recognise. You can use either the token or the ID of a word directly.

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