To begin with, thanks a lot for translating this story and sharing it. The plot does not revolve around a common possession, as it is a kind of moral degeneration to make the victim think and act like the guy who poisoned her.
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It's probably too much to ask, but could you please at least proofread what the AI shits out when you use it to "translate" something. Because it hurts to read at a LOT of parts because of how bad it is.
I'm not even saying to do the whole translation without AI. I'm just asking for proofreading so the whole thing makes sense.