RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/3855960/741ce4284d/

Part 2 RAW https://e-hentai.org/g/4115351/fc40e673bd/

Pixiv https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/290106

Quick, Ktaro-kun! Lock that shit down before the author introduces an objectively worse girl to be the one you end up with!

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The translation seems off here and there. For example, was it really necessary to add "Chad" to the translation? And did the original text really contain her remark about circumcision? I mean, the average Japanese guy isn't circumcised, so it would be odd for an author to add this stuff.

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I fixed PAGE 19 PANEL 2 dialogue, thank you pointing the mistake Forgunia.

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Bro what the fuck is this MTL
You did not even clean properly.

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@Forgunia
I mean, I could tell it was a MTL or a complete moron based on the title alone.

"My tall boyish childhood friend wants to be hugged"

抱かれたい (抱く / daku), can mean hug. But also means have sex with.

And shocker, when daku is used in doujins, 99.9% of the time it means have sex, not hug. So yeah, pretty much guaranteed it was a MTL.

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I would have used embraced or held rather than hugged. The lack of SFX translation, lack of cleaning, and such makes this look way worse than it is.

As for @Forgunia the word used is 漢 which can mean man (often with negative or aggressively masculine connotation) according to the Japanese dictionary I use, so chad actually works fairly well here, although I may have chosen stud instead.

Also yes the foreskin comment is there, but the connotation is that it was already peeled back, not that he lacked any at all or was circumcised.

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I won't comment on translation, because I'm also studying and learning english and japanese myself, but I do think that the cleaning and lettering is leaving a lot to be desired, it is annoying to clean, it is my least favorite part, but it is very important for a good reading experience. I'd recommend to focus a bit more on it.

And like @red death68 commented SFX are very important they can convey a lot, i think it would be nice to at least add some subtitle to them.

Nina <3

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