Cynthia tries to become and Idol.

OH YOU ARE GODLY AWESOME! Edit, could be better, but DAMMIT! It's MADE of win Regardless! This Artist has my interest from now ON!

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all we need now is for all the other girls to be made into a story

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Such an unexpected crossover... and I like it!

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page1: i'm pretty sure Whitney doesn't have such amazing breasts......maybe they're going with the "cow" motif.....

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Awesome, saw this doujinshi not long ago and really wanted a translation of it, thanks.

Now though, I know I'm probably gonna get negative responses, but I'm just trying to help:
When you edit a manga, don't use Comic Sans, ever, it's awful.
Try getting some new fonts from blambot.com or other font sites. The popular ones are Manga Temple and Anime Ace 2, both are on blambot and free.

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Oh god, page 4.

Now following this artist.

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@Rouga I'll use whatever font I want, and I like to use comic sans. If you don't like it, tough. If I wanted to have changed it, I would've a long time ago. Besides who made you the king of doujin editing anyways. I know I must sound like an asshole right now, but I hate it when people find the littlest things to nitpick. I've been busy as hell with college, so I don't have much time to make these, but I do anyways. So I'd appreciate it if you or anyone else don't nitpick my work.

Edit: Everybody that voted negative on this post is an ungrateful jackass!!!

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This is funny to me. Mostly because Cynthia is already an idol. And the idea of some guy turning her down is just, well, silly. So, yeah. But no reason she can't gather up more adoring fans. Or trap a guy into marrying her, apparently.

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Was it just me that was reading BAKKONM@STER as.... Bacon Master?
Anyway, this is an awesome doujin we have there, love the art and to start this corssover with Cynthia is a nice boost for wanting more to come.
Also, was it just me that was thinking of some Mirai Nikki ref. at the end?
Oh and... YAYOI FTW!!

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...there had better be a sequel.
Art's wonderful, it's a cool idea...but I'm just not a big fan of Cynthia.
And that cover...it wrote a cheque Cynthia alone cannot pay.

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"Cynthia tries to become and idol." Derp derp.

Also, nice use of ad hominem attacks, BTK69. That's REALLY professional, attacking people who are even bothering to look at your work and give you well constructed, critical feedback. And while we're on the subject of ad hominem attacks, here's a REAL ad hominem: The "BTK" in BTK69 stands for "Bind, Torture, Kill", which means that BTK69 is just like the BTKiller.

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Thanks, man. Your version is way more fap worthy than Doujin moe's. Read both.

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Why so short? Damn that misleading cover. Great art though.

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World's most misleading doujin cover.

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http://www.doujinshi.org/book/437896/BAKKONM@STER/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/424429/8eb72c7606/
English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/429444/a6fd9fd8e9/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/519827/7e481f1040/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/629819/73dd995197/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/730842/c1a0ad4614/
Korean Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/431011/9c5e035f57/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/531688/65d9cb17e9/

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@tentacle: critic for you but on the recieving end it looks like dumping shit as you wish

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