would love to have this translated in english

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It would ve been nice if it made more sence xD

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Doesn't make sense because this is only a section. The whole thing is nearly 200 pages. I have it, only it is in flash XP

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WOW! RARELY too see this kind of doujin! Thumbs!

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Just as I thought. Its impossible to make a DBZ netorare without everything being coocoo crazy.

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The whole thing is nearly 200 pages?no no,most of them are images of buttom or background

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It's nice to see such uncompromising corruption.

But I was wondering, without translation, it's hard to keep track of everyone, could anybody list the corrupted heroines on page 41? I'm pretty certain that's Bulma & Videl on the left, and #18 in the centre. But who are the girls on the top left and far right? Perhaps Launch & Chichi?

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ok nice job but wood you pelsese had 8 mroe pages or at lae 4 mroe call it flash back pages
frsit page if part 3 needs t have 18 killing kirllin then show kirllin on ground dead with his eyes witite then next page show flashback if kid goten kid trunks geting beat up will in super saiyan kid goten kid trunks get punched in there stomachs then in there faces then goten trunks get elbowd in there stomachs be on there knees
holding there stomachs bulma be the one that beats them up this happen for about 4 pages then in 6th page trunks goten be in base form stell holding there stomachs then bulma knee goten in the stomach knee turnks in stomach then bulma grab trunks goten by there necks

throw on ground step on goten trunks stomachs pick goten up by the hair jam her hand throw goten stomach then pick trunks up by his hair jam her hand throw trunks stomach then the flash back can end then it next page show goten trunks dead with there eyes witite and then show the others dead

ok
and do you took reqasets i some things that like to see you make

there lot if readers who want to see how kid trunks kid goten war killed

we all want see goten turnks get beat up who beat them up who killed them

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wood you put up more there stell the page here videl bulla have agery face that need to be put up there stell kid goten kid trunks getting beat up killed that need to be put up so can you put up the rest

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