not bad but i think the font size takes up a bit too much space from the artwork, imo maybe like 75% or 50% what it is now would be better

Base +15

You could make the font smaller, but also try a few with speech bubbles.
It can be hard to read when they blend too much into the background.

Base +6, Darknessend +8

great work! I agree with the font being 80% of it's current size.

Base +11