I loved the art of the original, it was 10/10, amazing. However the original ending felt a little depressing with a little too many daddy issues. He was not honest with her about his fertility and it seemed like she was only with him because he reminded her of her dad and she was trying to baby trap him for the same reason.

The depressing ending and baby trapping, was kind of a mood killer while I was schlicking.

I changed bits and pieces to make it so he is divorced but not infertile and she has daddy issues but it's quite toned down, also the implied baby trapping is gone, but she still wants a baby. I also love a wholesome ending so it is implied they get married in the end.

Happy schlicking or jerking, to whoever reads this.

y'all five starring this realized it'sa resized rewrite right?

Base +7