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Translated by limc based on the anonymous Chinese translation
Edited by mindonair

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The creepy poser dolls aren't adding much, just like the translation.

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LOL, why are you guys down voting Shanzenkou? It's true that the translation isn't adding much. There isn't any story to begin with.

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The "dolls" do look really weird. Kinda like they were made in 3DS max, badly. As for the story, he's kinda right. You can tell what's going on without any need for words. Still, give the guy who translated it some appreciation. He worked hard, I'm sure, and what Shanzenkou said came off as insulting (though he probably didn't mean it). Also, it was a nightmare to edit this one. So many ways to mess it up.

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Very nice work. It's apreaciated!

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Frankly, I find the yoma's comments (tone) somewhat amusing. And hey, most h dojins don't have much of a story, but its hard to tell till one can read it. Now we know this one does not, check, let's move on and translate something else :)

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I'll never understand cover art that is both wildly different than the contents inside AND of far inferior quality. Almost didn't check this. And it's the best Claymore doujin I've seen.

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http://doujinshi.mugimugi.org/book/20436/Youmainmetsu--Kita-no-Inranhen-/

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Is the original Japanese translation actually called it Yoma, because that thing is an Awaken Being.

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