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[Himura Jin] Mezame -Ochiru Onna Tachi- Ch. 9 [English] [Uncensored]

[緋邑陣] 覚醒(めざめ)~堕ちる女たち~

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Posted:2012-03-28 16:48
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Language:English  TR
File Size:10.41 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:61 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.16

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Posted on 28 March 2012, 16:48 by:   bfrost    PM
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This is a try, neither English nor Japanese are my native langages. I hope this is not terrible.
Feedbacks are welcome!
Posted on 28 March 2012, 17:48 by:   kymai    PM
Score -30
Nice one, I really hope to read something new from this author soon.
Congrats if this just a try you're good. If you uncensored this you're really skillful.
however an advice: for thoughts try to change font with Anime Ace 2.0 or Comic Sans, imho they're better

ps. here's the torrent
Posted on 05 April 2012, 21:15 by:   southrim    PM
Score +86
The translation is great bfrost, better than some I've seen by native speakers. There are a couple of typos though, like a question mark on page 159 that should just be a period and 'scolded' spelled 'scoled' on page 158. But overall and grammatically, it's rendered well.

kymai: "Comic Sans is better"

...No. Just no. And the typeset used for this is great anyway, clear and legible but not distracting. The cursive thought font was a little off, though.

As for the story, major turnoff. The kid seriously needs a School Days end.
Posted on 28 March 2012, 20:25 by:   Erranty    PM
Score +4
Some of the phrasing could use work, but for the most part it gets the point across.
Posted on 28 March 2012, 21:11 by:   MADARA-TAKA2    PM
Score +5
Pretty fucking intersting.Liked it but he keep doing shit like that one of teachers going to go yandere on his ass.
Posted on 29 March 2012, 11:07 by:   mddle    PM
Score -3
Not a bad effort. A couple of points, though: "alright" should be "all right"; and "homeworks" should be "homework". Also, on page 4 you've missed a capital i: "I must do all i can". I didn't read much beyond that because the story didn't interest me.

A good reference for common errors in English usage can be found at http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/errors.html
Posted on 01 April 2012, 04:23 by:   flashpanty    PM
Score +8
What an incredible bastard xD

thanks for this well-done translation ^_-
Posted on 05 October 2012, 06:01 by:   yaoiboi    PM
Score +2
Asshole but a true BOSS.

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