Proofreading would have helped with this one. I've spotted couple of mistakes.

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Perhaps, but still more then legible. But now the joys of waiting for the next part.

Base +8, Deathmatcher +7, jaylou1010 +8, Anime Janai -12, cm4000 +6

NO amount of proofreading could save this from CGRascal's "translation".

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You know, for once, Chado actually made a doujin with understandable pacing and not fucking up "who's doing what and where." With the amazing art and the improved timing/panels, this is great.

But with Reimu effectively out for this series, shit's balls out crazy. How do you take control of the strongest force of nature in Gensokyo?

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No, actually, a proofreader or editor would make CGrascal a pretty damn good translator. Probably not the best, but still good.
But the thing of it is, he won't get one. THAT right there is the reason he's so terrible; it's not that he's a bad translator, it's that he's a bad translator that ABSOLUTELY REFUSES to take steps to improve, even when the entire god damn doujin translation community has asked him to.

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Last page,

I don't care what happens to this country.

ukshadow is right.

Base +11, lucienar +8, gaging0 +7, Anime Janai -12

Could someone please upload a torrent download file for this?

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oh shit ! Reimu has turn in to a zom.......wait isn't she already a zombie ?

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