hi to you all a friend of mine told me about to this site so i thought to give it try

this comic i am working is about three high school girls that summon a demon to have revenge on the three popular girls

thing is they have to pay the demon to make this request come true but they offer there virginity as payment for there request and hell no way that the demon wants to take that from them because then he has to have sex with them and even a demon has his standards

you all can see why the demon don,t want ther payment so he is going to call the big boss

i also heard from my friend that there guys her that are really rude with there comments

its ok not to like my work and saying so free speech and all that but please keep it a little discrete

because if you gonna say shit and fuck to me i will say it back and more

hope you will injoy my work

be warned, dont take the harsh comments to personal.

Prepare yourselves. harsh comments are coming.

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keep going, it seens funny at least

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Decent concept, smart that you didn't try to write dialogue yet (pics tell the story). Your lines are a little unclean, and the second girl in page 6 is horrendously ugly. The potential is absolutely there though. Keep practicing, you're bad but by no means unforgivable, irredeemably bad. If you put some effort into improving you could avoid being the next Coco.

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Oh, boy.
It gets tiresome saying this (and probably tiresome to read,) but you really need to study. A lot. Especially anatomy. Male, female, human. Those arms are awkwardly shaped, and positioned. You have perspective issues, in that everything looks completely flat and two dimensional. There's no depth- due in large part to the fact that it's just a blank expanse.
There's no backgrounds at all. It's extremely lazy- just like the character poses. You have everybody standing at the exact same angle, straight on, or in a profile. Mix it up.
If you're going for a comedy, then most of this can be written off. In fact, the extremely poor quality can lend itself to the comedy aspect of it. If you intend for it to be erotic, you've much work ahead of you.

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I know the bashing may seem harsh at times, but it is totally justified. This is not the site to go to if you want to post your work in hope of people giving your work a real critique. So you cannot really blame the the people who come to this site in search of good hentai or whatever to be a little mad when they have to see this all the time. So find a good site to critique your work, it doesn't have to be hentai, but it should be at least something to get you started. But anyway, the point is you really have no right to be mad at the people here.

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Backing up Necronomicron's comments, i think you should also learn about depth of view (adding shadows here and there), lighting effects, different angles of view & perspectives...But Yes, first of all. Study anatomy. And also, throw in some creativity in panel positioning.

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