Not that bad for the art. Kinda odd anatomy in places and would be better with some more dynamic perspective/angles, but not bad. What it really needs, though, is some text, a decent story to go with it. It seems set up for a story, with the different pictures obviously following from each other. I wonder if it does have text to go with it, but it wasn't posted here. Whatever the case, it's not quite as good as it could be without it.

Base +8

Mark Savage is the writer, not the artist.
a:Bill Ward : https://e-hentai.org/tag/artist%3Abill+ward

Base +6