Okay, whats with the translation? It seems mostly fine, but a couple of the pages (5 probably being the best example) have really weirdly worded translations.

Base +8, kimston +8, soulfire99 +8, Anonyslime +9, HerpusD +8, Inconspicuous user +6, cm4000 +6, Rakned +2, Xx_M1K0R1N_xX +6

That was really sweet.

Base +9, Drakewyn +10, cm4000 +6

don't have anything much to say, imma just put this in my favorites

Base +6, Drakewyn +10, cm4000 +6

The translation is goofy because it was still in QC editing when someone uploaded it here.

Base +4, Anonyslime +9, Lonely Shrub +6, cm4000 +6

This wasn't the best touhou doujin so far. This might have something to do with the translation, but overall the plot was really cliche, and there really wasn't a whole lot to say about the situation that sakuya was in. There was nothing in this comic that wasn't said over a million times in other works, and the whole plot didn't make sense. This was not a good doujin overall. But on the plus side remilia did look cute in this one. (^_^)

Base +6, Pafrog -10, Drakewyn -10, Sael -5, Shinka~ -6, 6Jan_isnew911 -2, kiwino -13, kIsho Acrerion Orion -7