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Lyra`s human literal love (WIP ,draft ,whatever) (ongoing)

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jmf  PM
Posted:2012-11-07 12:22
Parent:539310
Visible:No (Replaced)
Language:Japanese  
File Size:1.28 MiB
Length:10 pages
Favorited:27 times
Rating:
65
Average: 3.45
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Posted on 07 November 2012, 12:22 by:   jmf    PM
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First upload, directly drawn by me, and guess i really shows XD

things in the draft that arent good:
-the text. bad speech bubbles , text hard to read
-drawings, some incomplete things that werent important at the time
-the last page an intro and outro
- it needs inking i know
Posted on 07 November 2012, 01:51 by:   SUPA_L33T_H4X0RD    PM
Score +6
Very good, c'mon guys, for a draft this guy deserves more stars!
Posted on 07 November 2012, 23:08 by:   HoleySwissCheese    PM
Score -5
An excellent future as an artist, I foresee.
Posted on 08 November 2012, 21:19 by:   TheTitto    PM
Score +7
It's good. Hope to see more of this or from you.
Posted on 11 November 2012, 20:27 by:   zaxxon    PM
Score +8
story please!

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