worked out the kinks from the last one from *ahem helpful comments
i used a crapy online drawing program plus this is a crapy computer tower

The panels were all over the place it was kinda hard to read.

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Oh god, this is bad.

But it's also hilarious.

EDIT:

Oh hey look, I said something negative about a poorly drawn sex comic that looks like it was done by a 5th grader and got voted down.

I wasn't aware I was on deviantart.

>i used a crapy online drawing program plus this is a crapy computer tower

Not an excuse. And crappy is spelled with two p's.

Either get better at drawing or just keep making them like this, because as stated earlier it's fucking funny.

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what the fuck am i looking at

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It still need a lot of improvement, but it's a bit better the last one. Why don't you try doing stills with characters before doing another comic. I think by trying to crowed so much into a comic page you're making your work suffer a bit. Once you've finished this try practising/ experimenting, trying to get the quality as high as possible, on character portraits and stuff.

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Yes, blame your computer and the program instead of your poor drawing skills.
Or you could own up to it and just admit you're not very good.

Edit: Also, the word you were looking for is KINKS. That other word is extremely offensive and anti-semitic.

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Can't wait until this one is done :)!

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This is pretty good, you have a nice and simple H story and pretty decent MS drawings.
The text is the only real problem for me since they're difficult to read at times.

Keep it up
4/5 stars

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You know it's bad when you can tell from the thumbnails alone.

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Am I the only one here that seems to enjoy these? Sure its a bit messy but give the guy time, he can improve.

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