I 'made' this story of some of the pages of "Falling Prey to a Flower" https://e-hentai.org/g/542714/8c5c13e9b8/. I know rewrite's are looked down upon, but I wanted to make this a more loving story. It is my first attempt.

if you're going to rewrite, you could have at least used an OCR and run it through a machine translation. And next time, use Wild Words as your font

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You dun goofed. There already is nothing more loving than monster girl femdom.

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Re-writes are a crime punishable by death.

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fullfill the purpose ? who writes this sh*t ?

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why can't i vote 1/2 a star?

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ENGLISH = NO
REWRITE = YES

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Ugh... nector? You can't even spellcheck a rewrite?

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I dunno... I like both versions equally. But what's wrong with your English... Anyway, Widget, don't get offended to downvoters.

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Please make this your last attempt.

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Now the question is: why bother?

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If you're going to rewrite, do it well. This is garbage.

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Remember what your mom told you: if you have to say sorry, you shouldn't have done it in the first place.

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Hey rewriter, how about you rewrite yourself, we certainly need you as a new document.

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Am I reading a Duwang translation?

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Yes! I'm being pollinated! I'm going to be fruit!

holy shit dude, lol

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No. If you have this much free time, please find yourself a better hobby insteed!

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1 star, sorry :)

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You have done good :), i enjoyed this a lot! Do not give too much about people that lack basic power of imagination, your story was refreshing.

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This re-write stinks! I like the original story better!

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For the imagination! Yes!!

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This hurts to read.

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"That's it, put it in my stigma."

lol! Don't you mean stamen? But that would be wrong as well, since stamen would be the equivalent of a male reproductive organ. Pistil is the female's equivalent.

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such a cute ending sniff ^_^

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yeah no, don't toil in god's domain and try and re-write something that was already good. that's like painting over the mona lisa because you thought you could draw it better.

if you really wanted to tell this story, dedicate yourself to learn how to draw like the rest of the great masters, don't bottom-feed like some parasite. you'll gain more money for original work, than losing it for plagarism, if you wanted to make a career out of it.

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Well, regardless of the rewrite, this story was pretty fucked up.

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ahhh did i say something wrong??? :(

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To those who make the author grieve this piece of creative work: Give the author of the rewrite a chance and some healthy advice instead of being rude - I don't think he put his time and energy into this rewrite, which he have been kind enough to share with you and the whole world, to hurt your feelings. Self-righteousness won't serve anyone, so please, show some kindness towards each other and the people you meet in your travels, even if you don't like them much. All people around the world deserve respect, especially those that are standing up for themselves and trying to either do some good in the world or sharing their energy and life's work with other people; such as the poor author of this gallery and rewritten story.

Over n' out. Please have a good night and think/dream of all the great people around you, that have helped you on your way through life... And please try to be such a great person yourself. there is always someone who will need you: Either one who is dear to you or a future friend :)

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Monster girl thats a plant girl with mind break, what else do you want ?
Thank you very much for translating this into english !
Time to study the story for research purposes only of course !
Excited for more stuff from this artist already.
Keep translating stuff like this in the future !

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Can we please just get this version on the site again? I have no idea why it was removed

https://www.luscious.net/albums/falling-prey-to-a-flower-english-decensored_257135/read/?index=0

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