TL/Clean/Typesetting done by me. First time (well, technically second time) typesetting, so criticism is welcome

Base +3, Zero Angel +38, JRockefeller +10, etothex +24, danixxx +34, WhatEver99999 +8, hihohahi +26

Pretty Damn Good For your first solo try I'd say.

Base +8, behelatao +7, Zero Angel +38, etothex +24, danixxx +34, WhatEver99999 +8

Hi, An-chan here!
This was supposed to be my final translation under the name of Usual Translations, so you kinda ruined it for me... Whatever :).

Always nice to see a new face in our community, good luck in the future!

You did a goob job here, but:
A few translation errors (pay more attention to it!), sometimes your translation is too literal or there's no punctuation, try to clean the pages of all text/dirt/anything else, typesetting could use more work [screams and such] and remember, bigger text bubble = bigger font size.
You're new, so it's nothing to be ashamed of. Feel free to compare it with my version.

I'll be waiting for your next translation.
Good luck!

Base +6, mellowjello +6

I'm no editor or anything close, but personally I think some grayscaling would make it look better, just like the version of Usual Translations has.
But nonetheless great work for your first time. :)

Base +27