raw https://e-hentai.org/g/28923/6198660b17/

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Delicious Alexis.

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At last, that was almost classic.

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Ok, that explanation I'd really like to hear.

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The quality of the images look bad..

The raws are much sharper:

https://e-hentai.org/s/1e0164c44f/20164-52

https://e-hentai.org/g/28923/6198660b17/

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This was the very first Doujinshi that brought me to E-Hentai. Very good to see it translated, at last :D

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i was waiting so much to fap to a translated version of this thanx

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There's a mistake, the artist isn't Umedama Nabu but Masayoshi Kogawa.

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Thank You Thank You Thank You.

This is great to finally have this translated.

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Fucking finally, this is great.

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could someone translate this comic into Spanish?

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One of my first doujin, all those years ago. Thank you

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There isn't anything by Umedama Nabu here.

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IF you give a mouse a cookie......

Anyone else think of this.......

LOL

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time to get your fuck on!

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a story about this doujin:

so i sent this to my bf because i thought it was hella hot and it also seemed like his cup of tea, and he thought Alexis's nose on the first page was her mouth, and that led to a conversation about derped out Jaden yelling "GIB UR GAEM IN" and now we just say that to each other regularly with no context whatsoever.

After all this I still can't see how he thought Alexis had a derpface, so thankfully this isn't ruined for me. Still A+ fap material.

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XDDDDDDDDDDDD I cant stop thinking that Jaden looks like CDI link.

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Never read this doujinshi until now, so this comment is very late in the making, but large portions of this translation are either mistranslated (i.e. made an earnest attempt to translate a line, but failed translate properly) or rewrites (i.e. clearly fabricated content). Not all of the story is like that, mind you, but a large portion of it is (and there is a lot of pure rewrite content).

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