poor translation and lazy edit...

Base +9, Hentai_kun +11, jin666 +13, pierredr -7

should probably put in the title what language it is.

Base +8, Crushermach3 +9, aloc1234 +27, Hentai_kun +10, Acerola +10

Pense a te relire ou a faire lire par quelqu'un car certaines fautes saute au yeux :/ Sinon merci pour la trad

Base +9, Dimzad +8, Hentai_kun -11, xc404 +5, lucky_roo +4

Je veut fait elle dans le vagine! Je vais me masturber maintenant!
What did we learn today, children? I learned what the french verb for pissing is; "pisser" :D I now know that it can also mean "to gush out", "to leak", "to shoot out", or "to gush", but surely there's a better word than "pisse"? Because to me, or other casual observers, the first meaning might be "I'M PISSING YOUR SEMEN!" instead of "YOUR SEMEN'S LEAKING OUT!". Perhaps a verb like "fuir" may have been more appropriate.

@doobik:
You are right; the typesetting is terrible! The characters look jagged rather than smooth; The translator needs to check the guides...
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=29852&hl=
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=61224&hl=

Base +24, jin666 +13

Tu devrais avoir honte de poster ce genre de choses...

Base +7, jin666 +13, droit +7, Hentai_kun +11, cladex +3, lucky_roo -4, pierredr -7

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/223647/cf01d13e9a/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/580170/781068bf71/
English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/332290/bcf28e4cae/

Base +26