No offense to the person who did the cleaning, but this translation is god awful.

Base +7, Chaosrains +7, Raiz111 +8, Gitami +14, Meccaflare +6, backslash +8, Moof22 +7, fierylava12 +8, neckbreak +12, Broctopus +6, bfdbfdbfd +6, lamaig +8, NailB +20, and 27 more...

Use of English name, shit dialog, and awkward conversation? Sounds like olddog shits again!

Base +1, Anony12788 +13, FO-Bakayarou +8, Moof22 +7, Level_Up +7, fierylava12 +8, neckbreak +12, KaiserBuliwyf +8, bfdbfdbfd +6, Techwire -17, Padappa +15, blackbomb100 +9, Nastro3 +5, and 15 more...

It is a rewrite not a proper translation which is why it was done poorly.

Base +7, Anony12788 +13, FO-Bakayarou +8, Moof22 +7, naught +8, Kyshatriya +8, neckbreak +12, bfdbfdbfd +6, Padappa +15, blackbomb100 +9, CarmeloAnthony +8, virgo2725 +1, bucket90 +6, and 3 more...

Olddog rewrites shouldn't be allowed on this site.
They're all horribly written.

Base +12, FO-Bakayarou +8, Moof22 +7, safety00 +7, neckbreak +12, KaiserBuliwyf +8, kr4zy +9, Broctopus +6, bfdbfdbfd +6, Techwire -17, Padappa +15, blackbomb100 +9, Nastro3 +5, and 22 more...

Goddamn rewrites, fucking wasting my time with drivel. I want to fap not cringe you assholes.

Base +9, FO-Bakayarou +8, Moof22 +7, Zero Angel +38, HXW +8, Naughtylusty +3, safety00 +7, fierylava12 +8, neckbreak +12, man333 +24, KaiserBuliwyf +8, laon +8, kr4zy +9, and 41 more...

anyone know the original source?

Base +9, Moof22 +7, virgo2725 +1, bucket90 +6

Original Source : Just search by the title Naburimono by F.S starts from 142.
I've checked it already, it exists in e-hentai :D

Base +14, Moof22 +7, virgo2725 +1, bucket90 +6

Is this a real translation now or not?

Base +9, Vuffy -7, virgo2725 +1, waltergeist -9

This translation is better now:)

Base +6, Vuffy -7, virgo2725 +1, ploopz -7, magico alverman -8, bnad -8, Varvacsen -9, Baseballbat boy -10, StillWind -14, bucket90 -6, ComplexSavior -6

The most annoying I ever saw in translation... "Lynn call me if dies the elderly" WTF!! Out of this world! the hell Call me if Lynn the elderly dies??

Base +10, Moof22 +7, virgo2725 +1, torill +8, bucket90 +6, jamrock1876 +7, CyberZero +10

This fap is english, mi no read, yes?

Base +9, alumar +6

Was that English? Didn't know...

Base +7, torill +8, Moof22 +8, bucket90 +6

AHAHAHAHA 1 STAR GWAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA

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Base +10, Demosthenes -15, marzipan +11, yukkurikeeper +2, Nastro3 +6, Spyderslicer +8, torill +8, The Inker -8, Moof22 +8, bucket90 +6, AkaiKurai -4, john34404 -7, magicx50 +7, and 1 more...

You laugh, you lose.

"DAMN GRANDPA OR DAD THIS IS A FIREHOSE"

Base +4, Nivama +6, Erizu-sama +5, CyberZero +10, ComplexSavior -6

I've never thought I'll see the day where I would find a translation much worse than laruffi...

Base +6

magazine raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/b8f386f2c7/65527-23
tankoubon raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/8b1cfd853e/36080-142

Base +33