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Music For Sarah 9 FINAL [English]

Western
Posted:2013-05-24 08:47
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:3.32 MiB
Length:30 pages
Favorited:60 times
Rating:
34
Average: 4.60

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Posted on 24 May 2013, 08:47 by:   grimest    PM
Uploader Comment
Good feedback?
maybe? (yeah sure -.-)
Posted on 24 May 2013, 09:07 by:   Sinon Granaxia    PM
Score +78
Despite what others may think, your efforts to publish this in English is commendable. The quality of the translation can certainly be better, but the contents are amusing as they were. Take your time and improve upon your works.
Posted on 24 May 2013, 09:08 by:   Justray    PM
Score +17
Do moar! keep going!!
Posted on 24 May 2013, 16:19 by:   Project_Demise    PM
Score +29
The English was a little clunky but it doesn't stop one from enjoying the story. This series is great.
Posted on 25 May 2013, 01:52 by:   dementio    PM
Score +19
A good series. Your writing certainly isn't bad and I don't mind that image generator. However, I recommend saving the pictures before you put in the words and running your lines through a spell check. That way you can prevent most of the English typos and correct any other weird errors those miss. Thanks for the comics, though!
Posted on 26 May 2013, 01:56 by:   ron_hayato    PM
Score +10
Good story. One can see you put a lot of thought in creating the protagonist's personality (and his struggle between continuing his research or just enslave everyone he can) and in ways to use hypnosis. I'm looking forward to reading new stories from you.

About your English, yes, it really needs improvement. I'm not a native English speaker too (and this comment might have some spelling mistakes, and/or grammar errors), thus I know it's hard to learn, but you are doing fine. Comparing the first chapters with the lastest ones, you improved a lot. So, no big deal, as long as you keep trying to improve your translation, I don't believe people here will complain much. I like to believe most people here know how hard it is to translate.
And I'm glad you did it, because I can't read Spanish. xD

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