a Kanten work about the sexiest game for the 3DS? oh yeah!

Base +8, AsakuraRetsu +1, Tsukimaru +22, model-r +9, Guardsman40k +6

Marvelous! Loved this doujin already, but having it in English is quite the bonus!

Also, who wants to bet some moron will downvote 'paizuri' into oblivion, even though it's the major focus of the doujin? -_-
EDIT: Oh look! Someone did! Nice going douchebag. I hope you miss everything cool and die angry! >_<

Base +11, yellow-chan +3, AsakuraRetsu +1, Tsukimaru +22, model-r +9, ThunderKurono +5, blunt005 -6, Guardsman40k +6

There are editing changes that I think would've improved the look significantly. If you've got space in a bubble, don't cut words apart and patch them with a hyphen. An example would be page 14, last panel in the bottom left. "How a-bout it?". There was no need to cut 'about' and it just doesn't look good. Other than things like that (on the same page you have 'chargeof' which should obviously be 'charge of') it's fine. Thanks for the upload.

Edit: yeah... wtf is with the paizuri downvote?

Base +39, BlickWinkel +9, AsakuraRetsu +1, GearZeroSky +10, kardonius +10, Tsukimaru +22, model-r +9, ThunderKurono +5, Minamoto-kun -6, blunt005 +6, Guardsman40k +6

I've been noticing the paizuri downvote, too. Even galleries that are focused on paizuri seem to get that tag downvoted. Is paizuri not a proper tag, and if so then why isn't it?

Base +10, ThunderKurono +6, model-r +9, blunt005 +6, Guardsman40k +6

Art 6. Plot 4. Sexiness 5. Translation 3. True to character 4. All out of 10.

Base +7, Hyoros -15

p17 that's some neatly spaced afterword
next one is kinda disgusting compare to this

@CPR: kinda wish we have more low-presence tag
paizuri count:

Base +7