First translation, hope you guys like it.

I translated this and then got it proofreaded via bounty here in e-hentai. After the typesetting and some re-reads, I ended up doing more SFX/redraws that I was originally planning to do. Hopefully with those sfx the story would be more kind to the eye.

Anything I might have missed(errors, etc)feel free to point them out.

Edit:Sorry :error in page 10, fixed now.

quite the interesting concept here, poor guy made me sad :

and the credits page was really hilarious good job in yer translation was really nice

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My feelings go out to that guy.
Nice translation by the way.

This story still bothers me. And I read this TWO days ago!

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@BruticusMaximus
It's on ntr blog so...
http://www.ntrblog.net/sb/log/book/eid2221.html

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Yeah, honestly Kiasa should make a follow up story with MC NTR'ing her. I don't want to be a white knight that says "get revenge" or "kill someone" just because this is NTR but this is a pretty good set up for exactly that type of story. Revenge would tear these friends apart and it would be delicious.

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yeah its ntr. he loves her yet they've been fucking behind his back. so as to keep people that dont like that its best to tag it as such

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Anyone who's actually had sex in a car knows there's no way in hell that guy was still asleep. This isn't ntr, more like the precursor to a love triangle, especially with her leading the conversation with things like "That Guy" and "Him" as if there were particular importance to him.

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Interesting take on the genre. On one hand this is netorare, since the protagonist's object of affection has already been taken from him by his best friend. On the other hand, the protagonist is the one fucking the girl regardless (which she somehow doesn't notice, did I miss the part where they explain she's completely blind?) which means the friend is technically getting NTR'd by the protagonist. So... they're both being NTR'd at the same time.

I can say one thing: it was pretty hot regardless.

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Review from NTRblog:
http://www.ntrblog.net/sb/log/book/eid2221.html

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I feel like all three of them got NTR'd and the only way out is some kind of happy group sex

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How could she possibly even mistake one for the other? I get that she didn't see his face initially, but she'd have to be blind and dumb not to notice the difference in their bodies. Plus, in the position they ended up in, Shou would be right beside them in plain view. I have to think she did it all on purpose. That, or it all WAS a dream, and the condom is from Shou and Hinata hooking up yet again while Satoshi was sleeping.

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@MARTIANxMADNESS: A sequel where "MC" should NTR her? Is there a prequel to this? Cause the guy doing the fucking here himself is the MC who just NTR'd her from Shou... Unless you mean "NTR" as in completely make her his.

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Another H-manga that delivers a swift kick to the feels, man I really need to stop reading these no matter how "good" they might be.

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It's not because he fucked her but because he got crushed by the reality he has a sneaky bastard and a whore for best buddies. His imagination serves only as visual aid to fuel that.

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I dont get page 26, what is that supposed to be???
I mean not the condom, but the area around it?

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for me this is certainly NTR for the MC but somehow loving the revenge sex concept..

I might be naive but after re-read the first 4 page i'm kinda hoping there'll be a sequel and then it'll turn out like this
https://e-hentai.org/g/542121/873ff9aa57/
any1 agree??

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best NTR i've read so far, where the feelig of cheat is there but the protagonist fucks the girl nonetheless

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Can someone please clarify what was the area around the condom? Kept looking at it and still cant figure it out

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so who ntr who again :/

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Reminds me of nagare ippon's ...
https://e-hentai.org/s/d4a24d323a/289466-29

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The only way to explain this story is that everything is pitch black, so what, does the viewer have night vision?
I'm hoping this all ends in a friendly threesome.

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I love ntr and I love stealth sex. Combine those two together? Hell yes. :)

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i think this is a perfect ntr story

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I kinda get the feeling that the girl has this all planned out and is just stringing both guys along. Like she's sleeping with both of them while hinting that she's actually in a relationship with the other, just to see how they react.

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I think he found condom under his blanket so it wasn't dream at all. I wonder how the hell he would end their friendship.

"Hi guys, I know you are fucking each other and I feel betrayed. It was fun ride but I can't hang out with you anymore, go fuck yourself and never call me again. "

If she got pregnant whole story would had interesting twist and would be a bit less bitter.

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One thought is we only have her word that she was getting it on with the other guy. Sothe NTR may not be real as I doubt she would mistake the two guys as it would be near impossible to get to where she was blowing him without seeinv him

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Oh god yes! love blind women, so hot

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Well...
I'm glad you guys liked this work :D.

Just adding a few toughts here.

@Orilol & pedobear1: The condom its laying between his legs, meaning it was not a dream.

@Edax , vmpslushie , dap00, sydin & stopwatch064 :In my opinion the whole scenario from page 04 till 24 it's supposed to happen in the middle of a dark road with little to no light there. I think that just for the sake of showing us what's happening, Kiasa drew this brighter than it's supposed to be. In the same manner the blanket was made transparent to let us watch what's Hinata doing(for those who didnt notice Hinata has a blanket covering her since page 04 till page 20). Also Satoshi doesnt know who's blowing him till he hears Hinata talk, but i guess he prefered to think it was her instead of the alternative...

@Nabusco: Thanks, I was thinking that none would notice the credit page.

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This is NTR right?

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This was pretty good. Sucks it will never get a sequel since most NTR stories are just one shots.

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I posted this somewhere else, but I will post it here too.

This should be considered NTR. Although the MC had sex with her, she isn't "his" at all. She "belongs" to their friend . Even though she was "stolen" a long time ago, the MC just found this out, so the feelings of betrayal are new. I have a special hatred for this type of NTR (and I hate all NTR with a passion) because it calls into question seemingly powerful friendships. The way these guys are, they seem like best friends who would tell each other anything, yet they kept such a huge thing a secret, which is a huge betrayal of trust. Not only that, but they took complete advantage of their close friendship and used it to HAVE SEX IN FRONT OF THE MC to get off. That's so fucked up. How could you do that to your friend? Don't you give any fucks about his feelings?

As with most NTR, I hate how fuck-up perverted and sluttish the girl gets from her "training". The complete contrast between her public and private personality greatly disturbs me (in this NTR type context--> where a happy-go-lucky girl is turned into a friend-betraying sex-crazed sluttish pervert girl. In other stories that are sweet vanilla, this contrast, barring the friend betraying pervert part, usually is a plus since in vanilla situations the personality change is derived from an extension of the love the girl has for the guy.

tl;dr: I hate both the blond guy and the girl. They are among the worst kinds of friends. The main character would be better off without them.

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I agree i want an second part to this. I want to draw manga myself as an hobby,and I maybe just ask the artist can i make a part two. But it will be a little messed up, like drugging him in the pass and having sex in front of him while he is a sleep stuff like that.

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Kind of hard to call it a perfect ntr since she ain't he girlfriend, all 3 of them were friends and he had a secret crush on. Now if she was his girlfriend this would be ntr, anyway like someone mentioned earlier it's interesting to see authors doing something new with that ntr genre.

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I hope she gets pregnant and the baby has black hair and bears a striking resemblance to the guy with glasses
and I hope the other guy is in the delivery room for when that happens.

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Good story. It's a shame, really, since his friends don't respect him at all.

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You don't fuck girls that are bro tier, bro

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WoW, pretty awesome book here, I think is not precisely NTR but the NTResque feeling is definitely there, poor guy but actually I liked this book because he might be in his way to get revenge, anyway before a sequel I could totally love to see the prequel.

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@Orilol it's on the car seat between his legs.

I think it's telling that she was the first one up and saw their positions and instead of "oh fuck, I fucked the wrong guy" she's wondering if they'll have to sleep in the car on the way back, which says to me that she probably knew who it was the whole time (and might want to do it again). Perhaps she really digs doing it with the chance of getting caught/secret sex, or perhaps she wanted to manipulate a situation where they could have sex without worrying that the MC would tell the other guy (because, how is he going to bring it up to him that he not only had sleepy sex with her with him right beside asleep, he actively engaged in it unprotected) or seek to modify their relationship (because how is he going to bring up that she slept with him rather than the "boyfriend"). It's hard to claim that this is 100% NTR because we only have the girl's word on the relationship between her and other guy and her ambivalence the next morning to the situation.

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We got prequels
1: https://e-hentai.org/s/73d3d8e6c5/871820-94
2: https://e-hentai.org/s/de53d5c301/897458-75
not yet in english

Now we need a sequel to see if the guy mans up and gets the girl

Last edited on 26 June 2016, 00:36.

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Wow the first time I have ever had any feels reading this.

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That last page. MC should go full nigga mode, "Ya'll can walk your own asses home, cya later losers."

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the sad part is he technically didnt get the girl :c

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imho, she knew their positions, she still had feelings for him (always wears the pendant) and wanted to confess about all this shit, but she is mindbroken sex-sleeve...so she also uses this moment to fuck him

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Makes more sense now after reading the prequel, makes me a bit sad for MC though

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welp she knew alright

Last edited on 21 July 2016, 05:20.

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with prequels
my heart
hurts
so bad

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@john34404
Chapter 4 is about Hinata confessing the truth to Satoshi and he accepts her anyways and marries her
Chapter 5 is about their married life where Satoshi knows Shou is plugging Hinata, but he accepts it so all 3 of them can still be together. Shou still thinks Satoshi doesn't know anything.

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