"Desirous"

Wow! Some hard sex, but a really thrilling story.
Makes me want to read more.))

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Necronomicron,
Thank you for your advice! There is such a proverb: "Don't look a gift horse in the mouth". My works are only my art, not business. I do it as I can. If someone will want to do art of mine as my business, so I am sure they will find people who will edit the dialogues for my comics.

Necronomicron,
Finally I feel I know English not enough... for expression of my opinion about your comment! It's a pity you don't know my native language, perhaps. :)

Necronomicron,
No, it needs only a different watcher (not you probably) :)

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Liana333,
Thank you!
I have a plot for continuation of "Desirous". But I do not plan to draw this comics for near future.

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This could be good with a different artist (one without cerebral palsy,) a different writer (that has finished high school and speaks english natively,) and a different plot!
Also, I'm unsure whether the "english" tag is appropriate or not.

666DD
I'm assuming you meant reader, as there's nothing to watch.

I do not know your native language, no. I am also not attempting to write a comic in it, however. Perhaps you could find someone with the time, and fluent english, to edit the dialogue for you. I'm sure someone will be willing to help out. There's plenty of people friendlier than I! Don't let me discourage you.
Just use my harsh words as motivation to get better and shut me up.

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