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Commissioned by Flammz
http://desudesu0.com/

The way he does the eyes reminds a bit of ShindoL, doesn't it. (And no, I didn't mean Flammz.)

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Not even sure what this counts as lol. If its NTR, the dude handled it pretty damn well.

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this is one huge guilt read.

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@SCSS not really. you could feel lewd in the eye in shindoL art.
And i don't feel it in here

Any way thanks for great stuff.

Base +12, mootxico +3

This is really weird, i dont know how to feel at the end of this.

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Interesting. Not sure if the girl really did like the guy but was too shy to admit it, and when she saw that he was fine with just sex like the other guys she rejected him. That or she really just didn't like him. It's just hentai but it's a bit depressing yet realistic leaving it at that.

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@EddaRobo - If anything, I would consider this a deconstruction of netorare. The guy likes the girl but finds out she's a slut fucking tons of other guys. But it's not like she's mindbroken or the guys are malicious: they're all fucking in mutual agreement because they're enjoying themselves. The guy also realizes that he never really loved the girl, but was just sexually attracted to her. He has the opportunity to go back to her, but decides it isn't worth his time and lets go of his affection gracefully.

Between this and "Drive Your Nightmare", it's nice to see that artists are getting bored of the stock NTR stories and starting to experiment with the genre.

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Looks like she just doesn't like him. The guy takes it well though.

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Well, think about it really.

A random girl you thought was hot, or a porn star you like. Do you want to screw her or have a "loving relationship" with her? Almost interchangeable for Ichijou also.

Story isn't that "odd" depending on how you look at it.

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Damn! Realistic hentai. No superviolent intense mindbreak where the girl gets fucked till she loves the guy. No, the guys sees what she is and decides they're not made for each other...

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@Riyin, no, I'm pretty sure she really hated that guy. Based on most high school hentai stories we can guess he probably asked her out without knowing her very well, based on nothing other than thinking she looked good, and "was popular" or had a "good reputation" or some other thing like that.

If, as he says (kind of stammering it out but maybe he's telling the truth) he just asked her out to "let you know how I feel", well, that's kind of selfish and creepy. I mean, think about it from her perspective - some guy she probably doesn't know very well takes her aside just to let her know he totally has the hots for her, and doesn't actually care about having a relationship with her or anything. He just wants to satisfy himself by telling her that, but now she knows he's got his eye on her, and they're stuck together in an environment where they can't get away from each other no matter how awkward it is.

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Another sad story...

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Sissie, my ass. He is manly than most of the main characters of doujinshi.

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I found this quite interesting (thanks Flammz and Desudesu for commissioning/translating this) both for the sex as well as the unfolding of the story and the end to it. Actually the end makes me wish for a follow-up.

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It's not a deconstruction of anything, it's just yet another unrequited love story. The only different thing is how he takes it, because usually the guy doesn't get to fuck, he only gets to watch. He on the other hand got a fuck out of it and moved on.

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Now that was a good story! It had a decent plot, and made sense all the way through. He likes the chick, finds out she's a slut (and social climbing through sex too, if all the sports team guys are any clue), gets a free test drive, and can honestly think it through and come to an intelligent decision. This was well done!

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Man, artwork sure is great, but I feel kinda bad now ' - '

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I think we like this for 2 reasons,

The first, in this version of NTR the girl was a bitch to him, yet he still got what he wanted for her. A bad end done right.

Second, the older guy is (in some way) trying to be a friend/sempai/older brother figure. Where as in other stories, the guy is a bully or dick that wants to fuck this girl a few times and walk away, or fuck her just for the sake of hurting the main character.

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She did love him but she know the truth if he don't love her enough to overcome the fact she's a slut. Their love will never bloom.
So when he confess her she try to reject him if he's a strong will guy, he still try to make a difference.But he's lack will and confidence, just give up in the first try. You can she the disapointed on her face.
On a second thought, she told him not to come again. Because she feel so ashamed when she so this disgusting side of her to the boy she love. She don't want and never want to him see this side ever again.
That's the end of their love story .
And everything after that is "Life Goes On" - John Mellencamp

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I still don't quite understand the big mood swing when she finds out it's him.

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I think Flammz summed this one up the best and most eloquently. '_'

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i'm not sure about this one at all

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actually i think this one was more depressing than people understand. the mc liked the girl in general and it seems although she acted all high and mighty she may have liked the main character a bit cuz she kept looking back at him to see if he was observing her. this also explains why she got more excited when the mc got involved in the orgy cuz the other characters kept talking about how she had never been like that before. feeling like his feelings for her where impure just like all the other guys now she became disgusted but prob knew that she would still get turned on if he was involved so she told him never to come back again once he was finished. so the mc convinced himself that he just wanted her for her body all along and that now he was completely over her however at the end he still cant help thinking about her with the 'Ah they should be doing it today' quote which means he’s prob not over her yet. just my interpretation tho could use a sequel to clarify.

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Interesting.
I think this is a conflict of 'ideals' in conflict with 'reality'.Ichijou on the one hand knows what she is, what people think of her- and how those two realities can't meet. Sako on the other hand looks at her like he could love her- and value her, and she doubly can't tell him the truth. When he finds out, she reacts in a way that shows she was giving his admiration special consideration. When he willingly joins in she feels betrayed- as he destroyed the 'ideal' of the 'him that would treat her different'.
Love is only a potential at best- but whether Sako never really loved her- or is convincing himself to console his loss, it's a pretty messed up situation.
That's my take on it anyway...

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There are two ways to interpret her reactions to the MC.

1) She liked him, but was well past the point where she could go out with him without this coming to his attention, so she let him down hard. Her saying never to go there again would fall in line with this. This could also be supported by the unnecessary addendum she added to his rejection when she said she'd noticed him looking at her lately (suggesting that the reason she noticed was because she was also looking back at him). Of course, a duck could also just be a duck, so that's not really saying anything.

2) She liked the IDEA that a guy could still have such a pure, naive view of her, and the idea of someone's perception of her getting crushed so completely excited her because she felt ashamed when he saw her for real. Her saying not to come again could then be for any number of reasons: the shock value had worn off so she couldn't play off of his disappointment again; she wanted to spare him further disappointment; she honestly didn't like the guy and didn't appreciate that they'd used him to get her off.

There's no bad end here. The guy got over a lust he thought was love, everyone who did anything in this did it willingly, and everyone involved moved on. He wasn't filled with any bitterness or resentment, and he in fact concluded that the issue of reality not meshing with his fantasy was his fault and not hers.

What I would like to have seen is the aftermath of this night in regard to exchanged glances. Sure, there will be no lingering affections there, but the idea that they're still in the same classroom and aware of what went down that night should leave at least one of them wondering what the other is thinking.

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The Girl has feelings for MC, she just didn't accept that, because she think he is a weak, her conflicts about her feelings, she tries to fight these feelings become the opposite of what she'd be if she were a mere slut she would have sex with him without opposition, just that she loves him and doesn't want to admit , she fights against it and so his rejection reaction.

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It's simple. The girl doesn't like the MC and is just slutty but that doesn't mean she can't have a preference. Just like a guy who likes to fuck lots of girls won't settle for a fat ugly chick if he has other options. The girl likes guys who are into fitness and our MC simply doesn't fit her tastes.

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@XNumbers, you're right. The girl only wants to be a slut for popular guys. The idea of such a guy like the MC touching her creeps her out.

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