Seeing the page where Fate gets reunited with Nanoha... Poor Fate, she always gets degraded in cumdump role in such type of het standard doujins.
This is one of the reasons, aside of bad plot in both Vivid and Force, I would want to see Nanoha franchise to die, maybe then doujin artists like this would give a break to such characters and would concentrate on new victims from new shows.
Base +15, Baelfael -10, The Inker -9, NailB -16, Viktorious +3, WashOxide -8, BooyaMan -9, dat PLOT -12, Hectotane -6