not bad kid, not bad

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You got quite nice style. If you could just draw some sharper lines, it would be great. Keep it up.

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it's quite good

Base +11, Necronomicron -11, volcanicviper4 +7, mr.frog +12, Zero Angel +36

can i request? you have a site ? u are amazing!

Base +9, volcanicviper4 +7, mr.frog +12

GET SOME PAPER that is NOT lined especially if you intend to exhibit your works. also your lines need work try to refining your lines more other then that you are doing good. proportions are ok try using a source.

nipples: try looking at how other artists draw them and find way to incorporate that into your art.
Crotch: most of the pics have a open crotch try to understand how the arse, pussy and hips relate to each other.

please dont take this harshly you are good just keep on going! i have not been brave enugh to post my own works yet but i have some thing in the pipeworks ;)

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dem boobie i like. good job!

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JJ_Zalem, dexxa, ratma : thank you for your attention and input information

Xsoul : request, of course, all train style image me.... :)

Harakiri_7 :I, too, was trying to draw a suitable proportion to the results better picture :) I wait for your masterpiece

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Quite nice. You've got some style there.
Great work!

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This is not a criticism, as I like what you have done so far.

Since you have gone to all the trouble of scanning your work, you might take the next step and use a computer graphics program like "the gimp" to clean them up. For example, it would be relatively easy to remove the lines.

http://www.gimp.org/

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First off, thank you for posting this.You really put yourself out there and for that 5 stars. You have to get a proper art pad. The lines just throw off the images so they look distorted. You have style and good form but it still need work. The important part is the raw talent is there.

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Very well drawn, not bad at all, I can definitely tell your trying. just work on perspective and proportions a little more to get this looking like something straight from a hentai, regardless though 5 stars! Now I hope this doesn't come off as spam but I would like your opinion on my work, coincidentaly it's also titled "My Artwork" lol take a look if you can. again Great Job!

Base +1

So when will your attempt at a doujin cum out?

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