This is my first translation, as I can't read japanese, everything was made up by me according from my point of view, I turned it into a bit of a mind breaking scene, but it shouldn't be far from the real thing. enjoy! she's quite the MILF ;)

How is that a translation then?! This is rewrite.

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I hate to break it to you, but if you made it up then this is not a translation. The correct term is a rewrite. You'll find that they aren't generally very popular here, as they might prevent an actual translation from being produced.

If you have an interest in translating but can't read Japanese, perhaps you could offer your services as a proofreader or editor for a translator?

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I'm also planning to do some rewrites of Akatsuki Giken's work in the future :]

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Nice art, That is all.

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not bad!!! LOL

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Good Stile, good comic. Keep at it. Curious to see what you will do next.

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Awesome art!
Awesome scan!
But rewrites are fucking garbage and I'm sick of them.

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Just to make sure ! I laught hard @ some parts of it ^^ & hey whiners ..like ya wrote no one of ya will consider commission ..ya didnt even knew this work ... "there he go"

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Can someone PLEASE translate this now before it becomes too late to do it!

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can we get a non-rewrite? fucking hate rewrites.

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