I like it but we need more

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this has great potential. I would also however like it if at some point he fully colored it in. at least when it came to the sexual parts.

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The best part is that this work is using a bit of ancient myths from Egypt, such as ancient Egyptians using Ankh's to convert their sexual powers into energy. And I like the part about the "Angh" empire, which is also a piece of myth which you can find back as the underground city in Egypt which was built by Thoth and 2 other Atlanteans. The cover art is great and I bet the finished product will look great. Good job, TripleHex.

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Page 6: Woohoo, sexytimes!
Page 7: DAMN IT KIRITO

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This is hilarious!

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Hi, you uploaded the wrong page 13, I messed up her dialog in the first version I uploaded to my site, I have changed it now.
I won't be coloring it because I'll be moving to another bigger project, but I will finish this chapter with rough linearts.
Thanks for the comments everyone

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Elayne?! You look like shit!

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