Alternative translation

The sweetest love story ever told!

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Aww yea, mother/daughter kiss on pg 44!

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FUCK YES SFX

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Why not translate the afterword?

What happened, psyburn21? This is the editing job that delayed the release?
EDIT: I see, thanks for answering my comment

@Mariem, @Guestoid
+1000

@AMonkey
Yes, here it is: https://e-hentai.org/g/462821/207068a7be

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Huuh... Kinda wish I hadn't given up the chance to edit this now if I had known it would end up like this T_T

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Dear GoD, my heart is not ready for this.

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@Bellmant, No actually Shindol delayed it, but ultimately what delayed and forced me to give this back to Raikoh was getting a job at the same time as all that editing work I had then. It couldn't really be helped. Afterall, can't really turn down a job offer with the excuse of I have editing work to do now can I.

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Why it censored..aaaaa but i love the art, totally worth to read :)

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Why must people make so many sad and painfull comics with such great quality drawing?

Is like hitting yourself with a brick on your birthday..

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@Kenyenzie you do realise you are basically saying "Fetishes besides my own don't deserve good artists!", right? Which is, well, I shouldn't have to point out how ridiculous that argument is.

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Awesome, I'm just wondering now that was it me failing at translating or how some parts are completely different :P ah wells. Good work on the translation! and hopefully you people would translate the next part too! (although a bit faster than this time would be most appreciated) :)
@psyburn: if you really pushed this for your job. I feel that we should all understand and stop complaining. anyone who blames you really needs to double check their priorities a bit

PS can this part even be considered shotacon anymore LOL

@shinkimitsu: as much as I want a good ending myself... it's JIN... lets face it... that's not gonna happen... its just how badly he's gonna end it for us :P

PS Although I do wish he would do two endings. a good one and a bad one

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@Kenyenzie: Pussies like you should just give up on hentai. The only sad and painful thing here is the fact that no one was able to give it a good translation or edit.

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I really hope that there will be a good ending to that story. thx for the translations btw :)

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Well unlike most victims of ntr this guy is working out and getting dtronger +smarter. I want a sequel where he becomes a total badass and has like full house of hot chicks lol

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This MC is actually pretty good. He wants to be better.

He might have been NTR'd now but the dude has the potential to be a stud and horde more bitches in the future.

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My god...
So much wait for such a sad translation. :(

Why didn't you use the already perfect work of krymsun and Afro for the first pages?
English sounds off and editing is good but not great.
The only good thing that comes from it is the sfx.

I can't tell you how much i'm disappointed by this release.
So much that i'll stick with Coresplinter's version...even with his poor editing, he still have a far superior text.

Sorry if that sounds harsh, but i'm too fond of this story to applaude a laruffi's level translation.

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Wait, this is the translation I've been waiting all this time? The one which I postponed reading this for months?
It's good that sfx have been translated, but the text seems less... fluent, and fits the bubbles a bit too much. I hoped it would look and feel the same as the previous story since it was the same group releasing, instead it seems like both this and coresplinter's would need improvement. Damn.

Ah, well. Thanks for finishing this project and your efforts.

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Is there a prequel for this manga? I'm confused about the story.

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bullshit detected

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best thing since slice bread

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The mother's pain and despair at the end... it really put a smile on my face.

"Reap what you sow, bitch."

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